Statements of purpose: a view from the admissions committee

I recently had the opportunity to serve on a graduate program admissions committee and had a few reflections on the application process that I wanted to share. In particular, I wanted to give some advice to applicants on what makes a good statement of purpose and how you can use that document to put your best foot forward in the application process.

Graduate programs in health economics and outcomes research (HEOR) recruit from a number of undergraduate and master’s-level fields. This intersection of disciplines, in addition to the lack of undergraduate programs specific to HEOR, creates a unique set of considerations that applicants need to keep in mind when writing their statements of purpose. Here are a few brief tips on writing a successful statement of purpose in your application to HEOR programs:

Tip 1. Establish your connection to the field

First, it needs to be abundantly clear to the reader that the applicant understands what HEOR is. While some students – such as those with a previous master’s degree – may have been able to engage directly with the field, others have to demonstrate their familiarity more explicitly. This advice is especially applicable to clinicians, who bring an invaluable perspective to HEOR studies but are rarely able to participate in research during their clinical training.

Writers can demonstrate an understanding of HEOR in their statements of purpose by talking about specific classes they have taken or mentors who have talked to them about the field. It’s also vital for applicants to demonstrate an understanding of current issues in the field. Keeping up with HEOR blogs and journals is a great way to gain this understanding! The Academic Health Economists’ Blog and Healthcare Economist are among my favorites.

Tip 2. Clarify your goals

Next, the admissions committee will be curious of what your goals are and how a graduate degree in HEOR might help get you there. This means writing about what you plan to do after graduate school. Nobody is going to hold you accountable to what you say in your statement of purpose, but discussing goals demonstrates to the admissions committee that you have reflected on your future and that you can be somewhat self-directed should you enter the program. Graduate school should not be a way of postponing your entry into the “real world.”

Tip 3. Demonstrate your knowledge of the specific program

It’s important to demonstrate abundantly that you have researched your target programs thoroughly. Especially for smaller programs, it’s helpful to know how you heard about the program. If a mentor suggested you apply, mention this! With the HEOR community being relatively small, there’s a good chance that someone on the admissions committee will know your mentor, which is likely to work in your favor.

Tip 4. Polish your writing

Graduate training is a massive investment for both the school and the student. When making decisions about who to admit, the admissions committee uses the statement of purpose to assess your writing skills, the rationale for your decision to apply to their program, and your suitability for a career in HEOR. A well-written statement can pique the interest of everyone on the committee, while a poorly written one can make a candidate seem less interesting, even when every other part of their application looks ideal. Polish your statement into a masterpiece that showcases your enthusiasm for the field and you’ll be a step ahead in the admissions process.

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Nathaniel Hendrix

Nathaniel Hendrix is a third year student at the CHOICE Institute. His dissertation is on the application of machine learning to cancer screening.